Twilight's Delight

[TwilightedSky]

Call Me twilight-
Runing For 6 Years -
I stand At 17.7 Hands -
I Am Marked Gypsy Vanner -
Looks To Be Male -
Covering Me Is Black -
I come from the outlands beyong here...long...long long agao. -
I am rogue, i am here to venture on my own. -
iFIRE FIRE burning bright -
His hoves struck the hround with a thud as he crossed the vast land, and as he ran he remembered why he had come: 'I have come, because i saw this place..i saw it in the flames..'. -
Never Say Never -

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[shurikan]

Hi welcome to Dathlon.

I cannot accept this post yet as it does not have sufficient Sample story.

IMPORTANT: you cannot role play this character until you have been accepted.

Thankyou

[Cole]

Sorry, but I have to agree with Shruikan on this one. You need a longer sample story.

[TwilightedSky]

Allrite here i go again:

Twilight's hoves struck the cold ground the song of winter struck his ears like the cold wind around him, 'Snow is falling, winds are calling, its winter. Don't dare to stop up for we are strong. Whoever dares will [shadow=red,left,300]die[/shadow]' Twilight shook with fear and with cold, he said to himself "I have no fear" but then he remembered a saying someone had once told him 'Those who say they are no't afraid, are never going to survive life, for fear is the wind, before the win.'. Now he beleved must be under zero, tempature wise, but he musen't stop, to stop was only to fail, at what he was working at. And [shadow=red,left,300]why[/shadow] wood he waunt to do that?


His shadow was cast apon the still frozem ground as the sun took it's first peek out over the horizon. It hapened so fast he could not stop, he started to slip, his front feet coiled under his chest and then he colapsed...but he had done it, he had made it across the barrens...but now..what will hapen? There he lay. On the ground as his breathing got worse, and his heart started to slow..'Where dose that leave me?' he wondered. 'I am sorry mom, i have failed'. He wispered into the sky then his eys rooled back, and he had failed.



(is this good?)

[Cole]

Excellent Twilight. Gets my stamp of approveal. Lets see what Shurikan says. I say accepted.

[¤ a m o ŗįâ ;;]

I'd recommend using spell check too. will just make it easy for those of us who role play with you =).

[shurikan]

yep i say accepted.
(and what amoria said, spell check is a massive help for everyone involved )